Monday, January 25, 2016

First Drafts


            Lamott used the adjective “shitty” to describe the essence of the first drafts because from the semantic point view this word serves the purpose the best. This is exactly how she feels about the first drafts of any written piece she produces. Writing the “shitty” drafts is not less important than reviewing them and proofreading the final version. This is the beginning of the writing process and it is helpful because “very few writers really know what they are doing until they've done it” (Lamott 93). You just have a topic and a broad idea what you are going to write about, but you may have no idea what exactly you are going to write. The “shitty” drafts are useful at finding some key points or words that deserve to become the basis of the final version and, more generally, “you need to start somewhere” (Lamott 95).

            The choice of the adjective is not accidental as the first drafts, as a rule, represent a flow of random phrases and word combination that relate to the topic. They are so premature and ill-structured that you do not want anybody to see them. It is not to say that they are completely bad. They may contain genial ideas or sentences, but overall they are not cohesive and do not constitute a complete sophisticated story. Therefore, the word “shitty” implies that it is something you need to do to get a well-written final version, but which you do not like itself. This is how it is because even nobody out of the famous writers “writes elegant first drafts” (Lamott 93). We need to take it for granted that only by writing “shitty” first drafts can we achieve good results and be pleased with what we have written at the end.




Lamott, Anne. Shitty First Drafts. Language Awareness: Readings for College Writers. Ed. by Paul Eschholz, Alfred Rosa, and Virginia Clark. 9th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2005: 93-96.


5 comments:

  1. Ahmad, I think you did an excellent job describing the word choice of Anne Lamott's writing. I really enjoyed how you incorporated Lamott's quotes into your own writing instead of just posting the quote and then explaining it. I thought that was pretty neat how you just took pieces of her writing to help yours. I think you really understood her paper and her meaning for purposely using the word "shitty" in it. You also did a great job being able to back up your reasoning of why you thought it was okay to use that word and why Lamott did as well. Good job!

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  2. We got the same idea, Ahmad. I’m very agree with all your opinions. You did a really nice analysis of Lammot’s word choice, shitty. She chosen this word because it is the most appropriate one, as you said, the writers got a topic, but may not have a perfect idea about how to write it. Then, the first draft is like a note, or a summary to record what you thinking about, and show you the way such as the main points recorded when you doing your final version. I think the shitty first draft is important even necessary, because people may forget some important ideas if people didn’t record them.

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  3. Ahmad, I really like the point that you really focus on in your draft. The point of how the adjective "shitty" is a well picked and perfect adjective to describe what a first essay draft should really be no matter how great the writer that is writing the essay may be. You did a really nice job on how you chose to analysis the word choice of "shitty" in his idea and topic. The way that you explained how she purposely uses "shitty" as the main word really shows that you understand the article and the meaning she is trying to make.

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  4. Agreeing with the other comments, and your opinion, Ahmed, the point that Lamott was getting across was that everyone needs a place to start and it's kind of like saying, "screw it" And just writing stuff that sounds like it means something towards what is being written, but is terrible, being the first draft. I like how you chose your words throughout the essay, giving some feeling to what you wrote. Kinda helps elaborate what Lamott was doing when she was writing down her own "shitty" draft.

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  5. Agreeing with the other comments, and your opinion, Ahmed, the point that Lamott was getting across was that everyone needs a place to start and it's kind of like saying, "screw it" And just writing stuff that sounds like it means something towards what is being written, but is terrible, being the first draft. I like how you chose your words throughout the essay, giving some feeling to what you wrote. Kinda helps elaborate what Lamott was doing when she was writing down her own "shitty" draft.

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